As it was not so clear where my starting point was I decided, to add in the beggining of my interview to make it more clear with white colour font three lines saying how I interviewd Sandy Rose and what we talked about.
I also added the number of the page in the bottom right of the page.
I also added the number of the page in the bottom right of the page.
I also decided to change the colour of my font to make the starting point of my interview more clear. I used a dark yellow colour to match the colours of the two butterflies in the bottom right side of the page.
I had to make some changes in my final double-page because I had some spelling mistakes.
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You have two DPS mockups and no TOC mockup.
Front cover:
Use more appealing font for the Date line....could use same as strapline but keep it white.
Maybe do "March 2009"
Make price smaller
Make barcode smaller
When saving from Photoshop to JPEG ensure quality is set at highest i.e. 12 as there is some pixellation on bottom right towards Sandy Rose text.
TOC:
The S of "Contents" is a different colour compared to the rest of the words. Use colour picker carefully to select the same colouur.
Slight pixellation on TOC too, so bring the original Photoshop file in to school to edit.
Ensure all page numbers are the same size.
Page number for "Suzie baby" is a different font.
Suzan and "Flow Hilton" have un-smooth edges. Please correct these or give them a bright outline.
DPS: Yellow full stop on intro paragraph.
Move page number up slightly and make it a smaller font.
Please bring in original photoshop file as top of cover cuts off.
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